Twilight's Dollhouse, Page 1

First page of Twilights Dollhouse! Read the story by Kaidan here: [link]

It's an awesome read, if a little gruesome at times. I'm excited for the upcoming sequel... you should be too!

Cover: [link]
Next: (will go here after update)

Well, maybe page 2, I might add a previous page of Canterlot castle to show where the scene is taking place.

I'm not sure whether I like the coloring job. IT's not terrible, but I feel like I could do better. But I know if I put more effort into it It will take me at least twice the amount time (if not more) to put these together, especially when the pages start to get more complicated. So I'll leave it to you guys:

Take a little longer for better quality pages? Or do I try to take the pages at a decent pace and get them colored.

Any constructive criticism is encouraged!

Curious to see what happens next? Enjoy pages 2-8 of the 8 page teaser here: [link] ^^